An 18-year-old girl leaves an AI-ravaged Earth, inherits the combat memories of a dead pilot, and uncovers a conspiracy on a hostile colony world. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZeaBOJi6OQ
Script title: IRONPIERCER
Written by: Based on the novel "The Spear That Swallowed Metal"
IRONPIERCER
Based on the novel "The Spear That Swallowed Metal"
Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZeaBOJi6OQ Written by Jaehyun Kim Contact: [email protected]
LANGUAGE NOTE: Unless otherwise indicated, dialogue between Korean characters is spoken in Korean and is presented in English for readability.
FADE IN:
EXT. DISTRICT 47 - SECTOR 45 - DAY
Two older gray Ironpiercer combat machines face two nearly new, gleaming silver Silverwing combat machines. The Silverwing pair guard a sector enclosed by a clean silver wall; the Ironpiercer pair stand outside it.
The shoulder-mounted missile on Lucius's combat machine locks onto a target.
Beep.
MIN-HEE
Lucius?
MIN-HEE
Lucius!
MIN-HEE
Mother! Force open his comms!
MOTHER
Understood.
A comm channel opens. Short, rough breathing comes through.
Beep.
Beep.
MOTHER
Missile-lock warning. The Silverwing combat machines ahead have locked on to us.
MIN-HEE
Lucius!
MIN-HEE
Mother! Lock on to them!
Beep.
Beep.
Beep.
Beep.
Be-beep.
Be-beep.
Be-beep.
Be-beep.
CUT TO:
INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - BATHROOM - MORNING
Min-hee touches the artificial fang with her tongue. A sharp pain shoots through her jaw.
She spits into the sink and looks in the mirror: a pale face, overgrown hair, and a loose artificial fang.
A pot boils in the kitchen.
INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
The cramped house is already filled with the smell of food. Su-jeong stirs a pot with her back to Min-hee.
SU-JEONG
You're up?
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
Happy birthday.
Su-jeong sets a small bowl in front of Min-hee. Something like seaweed soup.
SU-JEONG
Eat.
Min-hee picks up her spoon. Su-jeong watches her eat with smile.
MIN-HEE
Mom.
SU-JEONG
Hm?
MIN-HEE
I'm an adult now.
SU-JEONG
I know.
MIN-HEE
I can go to New Haven now.
Mom doesn't answer. She only stares quietly at the pot.
MIN-HEE
You're not going to say anything?
SU-JEONG
You already decided.
FLASHBACK - INT. CLASSROOM - DAY
A New Haven promotional poster covers the wall: blue skies, wide grasslands, a clear river. Eight-year-old Min-hee sits among the students. The teacher stands in front of the poster.
TEACHER
When you grow up, you might be able to live in New Haven.
The children cheer.
MONTAGE - NEWS SCREENS
Bugs larger than people flip vehicles and climb the outer walls of buildings. Soldiers' bullets spark off their shells and ricochet away.
ON SCREEN: CONTACT WITH NEW HAVEN'S FIRST SETTLEMENT HAS BEEN LOST.
Another report follows: the Second Settlement has disappeared as well.
BACK TO PRESENT - INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - MORNING
SU-JEONG
Kim Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
Hm?
SU-JEONG
Don't get hurt.
Su-jeong takes out her old wallet and sets a few folded bills in front of Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
What's this supposed to be?
SU-JEONG
A birthday present.
MIN-HEE
I don't need it.
SU-JEONG
Take it.
MIN-HEE
I said I'm not taking it.
Su-jeong smiles, folds the money, and puts it in Min-hee's pocket.
MIN-HEE
Why do you always do this!
MIN-HEE
Why do you always put me first? Think about yourself for once!
The house falls silent.
Then she slowly smiles.
SU-JEONG
I am.
MIN-HEE
A lie.
SU-JEONG
No, it isn't.
Su-jeong strokes Min-hee's hair.
SU-JEONG
Taking care of you is how I take care of myself.
Min-hee's terminal gives a short beep.
ON SCREEN - IRONPIERCER RECRUITMENT CENTER: INITIAL APPLICATION RECEIVED.
The schedule for the physical examination and aptitude assessment will be provided later.
INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - BATHROOM - MORNING
Min-hee lightly touches the artificial fang with the tip of her tongue.
MIN-HEE
Ugh.
She goes to the mirror and opens her mouth. Her gums are swollen and red. Dark circles sit beneath her eyes; her lips are dry.
INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
Min-hee comes out of her room. Su-jeong is sitting at the table.
Two pieces of ration bread and a black liquid passing for coffee sit on the table.
SU-JEONG
It's pretty swollen.
MIN-HEE
Not really.
SU-JEONG
Let's go to a hospital.
MIN-HEE
I'm fine.
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
We don't have the money.
SU-JEONG
We do.
MIN-HEE
No, we don't.
SU-JEONG
We do.
Mom starts fidgeting with that old wallet again.
MIN-HEE
Don't spend that money.
SU-JEONG
Teeth are part of your body. You don't just put up with pain like that.
MIN-HEE
You’re the one who needs to stop enduring everything.
Su-jeong hesitates, then smiles again.
SU-JEONG
I’m fine.
Min-hee grabs her coat.
MIN-HEE
I'll go by myself.
SU-JEONG
I'll come with you.
MIN-HEE
I'm not a kid.
SU-JEONG
I know.
MIN-HEE
I’m going to New Haven alone. I should be fine going to the dentist by myself.
Su-jeong cannot answer. Min-hee opens the door and leaves.
EXT. SEOUL STREET - DAY
An old ration notice hangs in the hallway beside a new advertisement recruiting miners for New Haven: NEW OPPORTUNITIES. NEW LAND. A NEW LIFE.
The elevator is broken. Min-hee takes the stairs. Outside, a long line of people heads toward the ration station.
She reaches the basement of an old commercial building.
INT. BODY-MODIFICATION CLINIC - WAITING AREA - DAY
The sign is crammed with text: AFFORDABLE BODY MODIFICATION. DISCOUNTS FOR NEW HAVEN JOB APPLICANTS. DENTAL, SKELETAL, AND MUSCLE-FIBER ENHANCEMENT.
A man with one metal arm, an old man with a mechanical left eye, and a woman with a metal plate under her jaw wait inside.
RECEPTIONIST
Take a number.
The young woman at the desk pops her gum.
MIN-HEE
Okay.
Min-hee takes a number and sits. A New Haven advertisement plays on the large screen: clean skies, green forests, smiling people. Fine print scrolls across the bottom:
Death or disappearance caused by native organisms may not be eligible for compensation under the terms of the contract.
ONE-EARED MAN
Are you going there?
Min-hee turns. The one-eared man sits beside her.
MIN-HEE
What?
ONE-EARED MAN
New Haven.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
ONE-EARED MAN
Don't go.
ONE-EARED MAN
People die there.
MIN-HEE
People don’t die here?
ONE-EARED MAN
That's true. You're not wrong.
Then the inner door opens.
RECEPTIONIST
Kim Min-hee.
INT. BODY-MODIFICATION CLINIC - BACK ROOM - DAY
The same doctor from last time sits in the back room. He wears a white coat that is no longer white.
DOCTOR
Back already?
MIN-HEE
It keeps hurting.
DOCTOR
I told you not to get the cheapest one.
MIN-HEE
I don't have money.
DOCTOR
The less money you have, the more careful you should be with your body.
MIN-HEE
I don't have money to be careful with.
The doctor hesitates, then smiles.
DOCTOR
Your mouth seems to be working just fine.
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
DOCTOR
Sit down.
Min-hee lies back and opens her mouth. The doctor peers inside and clicks his tongue.
DOCTOR
It's inflamed.
MIN-HEE
Is it serious?
DOCTOR
Are you going to pay me more if I say it is?
MIN-HEE
No.
DOCTOR
Then it isn't.
The doctor presses Min-hee's gum with a small instrument. Pain flashes across her face.
MIN-HEE
Ah!
DOCTOR
Don't move. You'll make it worse.
MIN-HEE
Isn't it already damaged?
DOCTOR
It's still usable. Lasted pretty long for a cheap one.
MIN-HEE
It's only been a few days?
DOCTOR
Exactly. That's quite a while.
Min-hee grips the arms of the chair. The doctor glances at the screen and starts reading her file.
DOCTOR
Kim Min-hee. Eighteen. Application for departure to New Haven in progress.
MIN-HEE
That sort of thing shows up too?
DOCTOR
These days, everything shows up. Especially poor people's records.
MIN-HEE
Why?
DOCTOR
So they can't run away.
The doctor says it like it's nothing.
DOCTOR
You applied to... Ironpiercer?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
DOCTOR
Why there of all places?
MIN-HEE
Why?
DOCTOR
Because that's where lunatics go.
MIN-HEE
I heard it's just a company.
DOCTOR
A sensible company protects people who can pay. A company that protects people who can't isn't good—it's weird. Those bastards have to be lying.
DOCTOR
Still, if you go there, they might fix one tooth for free.
MIN-HEE
Really?
DOCTOR
I don't really know.
DOCTOR
Protecting poor people for free.
The doctor mutters as he picks up a syringe.
DOCTOR
I'll numb the area. It's the cheap stuff, so it won't last long.
MIN-HEE
Does the expensive kind last longer?
DOCTOR
Yeah, but not by much.
The needle enters her gum. A tear slips from the corner of her eye. Metal scrapes and machinery whirs as the procedure continues.
DOCTOR
Done.
The doctor says, pulling off his gloves.
DOCTOR
This one should last a little longer.
MIN-HEE
How long?
DOCTOR
If you take it easy, it should behave.
MIN-HEE
I'm going to New Haven.
DOCTOR
Then I don't know.
Min-hee gets up. At the counter, she pays 150,000 credits and reaches for the door.
DOCTOR
Kim Min-hee.
DOCTOR
New Haven really is a place where people die.
MIN-HEE
I heard you the first time.
DOCTOR
Then hear it again.
DOCTOR
A lot of people go there because they can't make it here. But you know what? Here, you die slow. There, you die fast.
MIN-HEE
Then where am I supposed to go?
MIN-HEE
There isn't anywhere.
MIN-HEE
Still, I heard Ironpiercer is different.
DOCTOR
Of course they're different.
The doctor turns around as he says it.
DOCTOR
You'll die differently.
Min-hee climbs the stairs. Outside, a cloudy sky hangs overhead. She touches the newly fitted fang with the tip of her tongue.
Min-hee's terminal beeps.
ON SCREEN - IRONPIERCER RECRUITMENT CENTER
PHYSICAL EXAMINATION AND APTITUDE ASSESSMENT SCHEDULE. TOMORROW, 9:00 A.M. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3. LATE ARRIVAL WILL BE TREATED AS WITHDRAWAL OF THE APPLICATION.
INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - MORNING
A piece of ration bread and warm water sit on the table. Su-jeong looks tired.
SU-JEONG
You're up?
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
Eat before you go.
MIN-HEE
I'm fine.
SU-JEONG
The examination might take a while.
MIN-HEE
It's okay.
SU-JEONG
It'll be hard on an empty stomach.
MIN-HEE
What about you?
SU-JEONG
I already ate.
MIN-HEE
I'm not hungry.
SU-JEONG
Eat now.
MIN-HEE
I'll be late.
SU-JEONG
There's still plenty of time.
MIN-HEE
They said being late would be treated as withdrawing my application.
SU-JEONG
I'll come with you.
MIN-HEE
What?
SU-JEONG
To the examination center.
MIN-HEE
Why?
SU-JEONG
Just because.
MIN-HEE
I'm not a kid anymore.
SU-JEONG
I know.
MIN-HEE
Then don't.
SU-JEONG
Let's stop by the ration station on the way.
MIN-HEE
Now?
SU-JEONG
We have to collect today's rations. If we go late, we'll have to wait a long time.
MIN-HEE
Then go by yourself.
SU-JEONG
It's on the way to the examination center.
Min-hee and Su-jeong leave the house together.
EXT. RATION STATION - MORNING
A gray building. A gray morning. A long line has already formed. A huge display board lists the day's basic ration allotment.
It's still early, but there are already many people outside. Everyone is walking toward the ration station. Some carry empty bags, while others pull small carts. Children cling to their parents' hands and rub their sleepy eyes.
SU-JEONG
Wait here.
MIN-HEE
Why?
SU-JEONG
I'll be back soon.
MIN-HEE
We can go together.
SU-JEONG
There are too many people.
MIN-HEE
So?
Min-hee follows Su-jeong into the line. Su-jeong fidgets with her bag strap.
The line moves painfully slowly. At the front, an automated terminal calls out names. People tap their ID cards, scan their faces, and receive their rations. Anyone whose record raises a problem is moved aside.
SYSTEM
Next.
SYSTEM
Park Young-ho. Unemployed adult. Basic ration approved.
SYSTEM
Next.
SYSTEM
Lee Seon-ah. Dependent guardian. Additional child ration approved.
SYSTEM
Next.
SYSTEM
Choi Deok-gu. Ration withheld. Reason: identity verification failure.
An old man tries to say something, but the security drone beside him lifts slightly into the air, and he immediately closes his mouth.
As Mom's turn approaches, her hands move faster. She grips the bag strap, touches her ID card, then grabs the strap again.
MIN-HEE
Mom.
SU-JEONG
Hm?
MIN-HEE
What is it?
SU-JEONG
What do you mean?
MIN-HEE
Why are you acting like that?
SU-JEONG
It's nothing.
SYSTEM
Next.
Mom taps her ID card against the terminal, and her name appears on the screen.
SYSTEM
Kim Su-jeong. Basic ration approved.
The terminal pauses, then speaks again.
A small door opens, and the rations come out. Mom puts them into her bag with practiced ease.
SYSTEM
Kim Su-jeong. Lunch ration voluntarily declined. Equivalent credits issued.
SYSTEM
18 consecutive days. Do you wish to maintain this status?
Su-jeong's hand pauses. Min-hee looks at her. Su-jeong does not look back.
Around them: people talking, a child crying, rations dropping into a metal bin.
SU-JEONG
Maintain.
SYSTEM
Processed.
EXT. OUTSIDE RATION STATION - MORNING
SU-JEONG
Let's go.
Su-jeong pulls Min-hee outside. Cold air strikes Min-hee's face.
MIN-HEE
Since when?
SU-JEONG
Since when what?
MIN-HEE
Lunch.
Mom falls silent.
MIN-HEE
Mom.
Su-jeong hugs the ration bag to her chest.
SU-JEONG
I don't usually eat lunch anyway.
MIN-HEE
Did you do this every time my birthday came around?
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
Have you been skipping lunch?
MIN-HEE
Mom, did you save all the money in that old wallet like this?
Mom lowers her eyes, weighing her words.
SU-JEONG
I'm sorry.
MIN-HEE
I'm not going to spend that money.
SU-JEONG
Use it.
MIN-HEE
I won't.
SU-JEONG
It's yours.
MIN-HEE
It's not mine.
SU-JEONG
It is.
MIN-HEE
It's your lunch.
Mom closes her mouth.
SU-JEONG
You'll be late for the examination.
MIN-HEE
Go home, Mom.
SU-JEONG
I'll come with you.
MIN-HEE
Don't.
Mom stops walking.
Min-hee keeps her back to her.
MIN-HEE
I can go by myself.
MIN-HEE
Really.
SU-JEONG
All right.
SU-JEONG
Be careful.
INT. BUS - MORNING
The bus to the examination center is quiet. People look at their terminals or close their eyes. Gray buildings pass outside the window, with New Haven recruitment advertisements pasted between them.
HIGH RISK, HIGH RETURN. CONTRACT WORKERS WANTED FOR SETTLEMENT DEFENSE. GUARANTEED SURVIVAL BONUS. BODY ENHANCEMENT COSTS COVERED.
The bus stops.
EXT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - DAY
The examination center is larger than Min-hee expected. Company flags and holographic advertisements hover above the gray concrete building.
INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - REGISTRATION BOOTH - DAY
At the back of the lobby, a small registration desk bears worn silver letters: IRONPIERCER. Beneath them: FOR A BETTER TOMORROW.
The employee behind the booth looks tired, with dark circles beneath her eyes.
EMPLOYEE
Let me verify your ID.
The employee inside the booth speaks.
EMPLOYEE
Please place it here.
MIN-HEE
Oh. Okay.
Min-hee takes out her ID card and places it on the terminal.
EMPLOYEE
Kim Min-hee. Eighteen. You recently attained adult status.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
EMPLOYEE
Do you have a guardian consent form?
MIN-HEE
I’m an adult now.
EMPLOYEE
Oh. Right. Then please sign for yourself.
EMPLOYEE
Your application number.
The employee attaches a thin paper bracelet to Min-hee's wrist. A-47 is printed on it.
EMPLOYEE
Please wait in the inner waiting room. Your physical examination will begin when your number is called.
MIN-HEE
How long will it take?
EMPLOYEE
It varies a little from applicant to applicant.
MIN-HEE
Will I know whether I passed today?
EMPLOYEE
Ironpiercer doesn’t usually give immediate results.
MIN-HEE
Why not?
EMPLOYEE
Because it’s an annoying company.
The annoyed woman turns back to the screen.
EMPLOYEE
Next.
A narrow passage runs behind the booth. The walls are gray, and a white line runs along the floor. At the end of it is a small waiting room.
INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - WAITING ROOM - DAY
Old chairs line the walls. A single water dispenser stands in the middle. An Ironpiercer introduction video loops silently on a wall screen.
On screen, people in gray combat suits walk between collapsed buildings. One carries another person out. A drone falls from the sky. The image changes: FOR A BETTER TOMORROW.
HAN SI-WOO
First time?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
HAN SI-WOO
Ironpiercer. First time applying?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
HAN SI-WOO
Did you apply anywhere else?
MIN-HEE
No.
HAN SI-WOO
You chose this place first?
MIN-HEE
Why?
HAN SI-WOO
It doesn’t pay well.
The man suddenly leans closer and lowers his voice.
HAN SI-WOO
You saw Goldenhound outside, right? Their signing bonus alone can feed you for half a year. Blueshield gets family ration rights approved immediately.
MIN-HEE
Then why are you here?
The man smiles briefly and shrugs.
HAN SI-WOO
They rejected me.
The man looks back at the video.
HAN SI-WOO
Ironpiercer is strange. They could just go where the money is, but they keep taking jobs in the strangest places.
MIN-HEE
Strangest places?
HAN SI-WOO
Settlements where the contract barely covers the cost. Abandoned zones. Unregistered refugee districts. Places like that.
MIN-HEE
Is that why people don’t come?
HAN SI-WOO
Of course they don’t. The chance of dying is about the same, but the pay is lower.
PA SYSTEM
A-47. Kim Min-hee. Physical examination room three.
HAN SI-WOO
If you fail here, try the company next door.
MIN-HEE
Why?
HAN SI-WOO
They aren’t very picky.
INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - PHYSICAL EXAM ROOM - DAY
A small, cold room: an examination platform, two medical drones, and a woman in a white coat.
EXAMINER
Take off your shoes and step onto the examination platform.
Min-hee removes her shoes and steps up. A medical drone circles her, sweeping a blue scanning beam from head to toe.
The woman scans the screen.
EXAMINER
You’re underweight.
EXAMINER
Your strength is low.
EXAMINER
Your nutritional status is poor as well.
EXAMINER
Low-grade artificial tooth in the oral cavity. Low stability. No signs of infection. Recalibration recommended before field deployment.
EXAMINER
Any pain?
MIN-HEE
No.
EXAMINER
Recent procedure?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
EXAMINER
Why did you have it done?
MIN-HEE
Because I needed it.
EXAMINER
Self-maintenance before moving to New Haven?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
The woman looks back at the screen.
EXAMINER
Quite a few of your metrics are still below field standards.
MIN-HEE
Does that mean I failed?
EXAMINER
I can’t tell you the final result.
MIN-HEE
Then who decides?
EXAMINER
The company makes the final decision.
EXAMINER
Physical examination complete. Proceed to the aptitude assessment room.
MIN-HEE
Are there many people like me?
EXAMINER
What kind of people?
MIN-HEE
People with a lot of items below standard.
EXAMINER
You’re average among the applicants.
INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - APTITUDE ROOM - DAY
Small partitions stand in rows, each with a headset and terminal. Cameras are embedded in the walls. Several applicants are already working through questions.
ATTENDANT
A-47. Seat twelve.
Min-hee sits and puts on the headset. The sounds around her fade.
ON SCREEN: IRONPIERCER APTITUDE ASSESSMENT - SITUATIONAL JUDGMENT.
A rescue request has been received from 3 unregistered children 300 meters outside a contract facility. At the same time, the outer wall at the facility's east gate has been damaged. Communications are unstable, and support forces are expected to arrive in 9 minutes. Where do you go?
OPTIONS: THE EAST GATE OF THE CONTRACT FACILITY / THE LOCATION OF THE UNREGISTERED CHILDREN / REMAIN AT YOUR CURRENT POSITION / DEFER JUDGMENT UNTIL COMMAND RESPONDS.
Min-hee presses: THE LOCATION OF THE UNREGISTERED CHILDREN.
ON SCREEN: DAMAGE TO THE FACILITY'S OUTER WALL MAY RESULT IN FINANCIAL LOSS TO THE EMPLOYER. DO YOU MAINTAIN YOUR JUDGMENT?
Min-hee selects: MAINTAIN JUDGMENT.
ON SCREEN: THE ACTION MAY CONSTITUTE A BREACH OF CONTRACT AND GROUNDS FOR DISCIPLINARY ACTION. DO YOU MAINTAIN YOUR JUDGMENT?
She selects: MAINTAIN JUDGMENT.
ON SCREEN: YOUR CHANCE OF SURVIVAL MAY DECREASE. DO YOU MAINTAIN YOUR JUDGMENT?
A beat. Min-hee selects: MAINTAIN JUDGMENT.
The screen goes black. Then: ADDITIONAL QUESTIONING REQUIRED.
YOON SEO-JIN
A-47. Can you hear me?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
Explain the reasoning behind your last decision.
MIN-HEE
They’re children.
YOON SEO-JIN
Explain again.
MIN-HEE
They’re children.
YOON SEO-JIN
Did you consider the damage to the contract facility?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
And you chose rescue anyway?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
Why?
MIN-HEE
I don’t want to let children die over money.
YOON SEO-JIN
You may be disciplined for violating the contract.
MIN-HEE
That’s for the company to decide.
YOON SEO-JIN
You might get fired.
MIN-HEE
That’s still better than letting the children die.
YOON SEO-JIN
Ironpiercer is not a charity.
MIN-HEE
I know.
YOON SEO-JIN
We are a security company. We protect people and facilities under contract.
MIN-HEE
I know.
YOON SEO-JIN
If you misunderstand that, you will die in the field.
YOON SEO-JIN
But in the field, you’ll keep encountering people who aren’t covered by the contract.
YOON SEO-JIN
Unregistered children. Refugees of unknown identity. Workers without ration rights. Unregistered residents with nowhere to live.
YOON SEO-JIN
If you wait for orders from above every time, it is usually too late.
YOON SEO-JIN
Ms. Kim.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
You have a tendency to disobey orders.
YOON SEO-JIN
Your risk assessment is inconsistent as well.
YOON SEO-JIN
But you do not seem like someone who runs away.
She falls silent. A moment later, the screen changes.
HAN SI-WOO
You screwed up?
MIN-HEE
Is it that obvious?
HAN SI-WOO
People coming out of there have two kinds of faces. Regular screwed and weirdly screwed. You’re the second.
MIN-HEE
What does that mean?
HAN SI-WOO
Pending.
The man shakes his bracelet.
HAN SI-WOO
I’m pending too.
MIN-HEE
Does pending mean we failed?
HAN SI-WOO
Who knows? They reject the clear- cut cases on the spot, but apparently troublesome applicants get put on hold.
MIN-HEE
Troublesome people?
HAN SI-WOO
People who don’t listen, but don’t look like they’ll run.
PA SYSTEM
A-47. Results desk.
INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - RESULTS DESK - DAY
The same tired employee turns the results screen toward Min-hee.
ON SCREEN: MULTIPLE PHYSICAL CRITERIA BELOW STANDARD. HIGH RISK OF POOR FIELD ADAPTATION. LOW PRIORITIZATION OF
CONTRACTUAL OBJECTIVES. STRONG TENDENCY TO PRIORITIZE RESCUE EFFORTS OUTSIDE CONTRACTUAL OBLIGATIONS. ADDITIONAL INTERVIEW REQUIRED.
EMPLOYEE
Ms. Kim.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
MIN-HEE
Did I fail?
EMPLOYEE
No.
MIN-HEE
Did I pass?
EMPLOYEE
No.
MIN-HEE
Then what is it?
EMPLOYEE
Please report to the Ironpiercer Temporary Seoul Branch for an additional interview.
MIN-HEE
Today?
EMPLOYEE
Yes.
MIN-HEE
By what time?
The employee turns the screen toward her: TODAY, 18:00. IRONPIERCER TEMPORARY SEOUL BRANCH. FAILURE TO ATTEND WILL BE CONSIDERED WITHDRAWAL OF APPLICATION.
EXT. SEOUL - EVENING
Four bus stops.
Two subway stops.
Then a short walk down an alley lined with old commercial buildings.
EXT. IRONPIERCER TEMPORARY SEOUL BRANCH - EVENING
It is an old five-story building. On the first floor are a closed pharmacy, an old lottery shop, and a laundromat. Several signs have burned-out lights, and old sticker marks remain on the glass door.
The Ironpiercer eagle logo is attached to a small sign beside the entrance.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - RECEPTION - EVENING
EMPLOYEE
Ms. Kim?
The employee at the desk looks up.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
EMPLOYEE
You’re here for the additional interview, right?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
EMPLOYEE
I’ll verify your ID card.
EMPLOYEE
Please wait in the waiting room. We’ll call you shortly.
A large map of New Haven hangs on the wall. Settlements and danger zones are marked in green, yellow, and red. Most of it is red.
HAN SI-WOO
Here we are again.
MIN-HEE
Looks like it.
HAN SI-WOO
Well, if we’ve made it this far, maybe we’ve practically passed.
MIN-HEE
Or they brought us here to reject us in a more annoying way.
HAN SI-WOO
This company really is annoying.
MIN-HEE
What’s your name?
HAN SI-WOO
Me?
MIN-HEE
It looks like we’re the only two pending applicants.
HAN SI-WOO
Han Si-woo.
MIN-HEE
Han-shoo? Aren’t you Korean?
HAN SI-WOO
No. Not Han-shoo. Han Si-woo.
MIN-HEE
Oh.
HAN SI-WOO
And you’re Kim Min-hee?
MIN-HEE
What?
HAN SI-WOO
The speaker practically shouted it earlier. A-47, Ms. Kim.
Han Si-woo starts fiddling with the zipper ring again.
HAN SI-WOO
Did you contact home?
MIN-HEE
Not yet.
HAN SI-WOO
Why?
MIN-HEE
Just because.
HAN SI-WOO
‘Just because’ is usually the most complicated reason.
MIN-HEE
What about you?
HAN SI-WOO
Me?
MIN-HEE
Did you call someone?
HAN SI-WOO
If I had someone to call back home, I probably wouldn’t be here.
PA SYSTEM
A-47. Interview room two.
HAN SI-WOO
Good luck.
MIN-HEE
It’s only an interview.
HAN SI-WOO
Interviews here are a little strange too.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - INTERVIEW ROOM - EVENING
Inside are a desk and two chairs. A woman sits on the far side. Black suit. Graying hair pulled into a short ponytail. A scar runs across the left side of her face. She looks nothing like the bright people in advertisements.
YOON SEO-JIN
Ms. Kim.
YOON SEO-JIN
Sit.
YOON SEO-JIN
I’m Yoon Seo-jin, recruitment officer for the Ironpiercer Temporary Seoul Branch.
MIN-HEE
I’m Kim Min-hee.
YOON SEO-JIN
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
Your physical condition is poor.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
Low strength. Poor nutritional status.
YOON SEO-JIN
You’ll need native-level language ability, so if you proceed with neural imprinting, we’ll have to use English-language data.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
You applied for field work with higher hazard pay.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
Why did you apply to our company?
MIN-HEE
I want my mom to eat properly.
YOON SEO-JIN
That reason alone won’t keep you going for long.
MIN-HEE
What?
YOON SEO-JIN
Many people come because they want to feed someone. Parents. Siblings. Children. Debt. Medical bills. Ration rights.
YOON SEO-JIN
Those people often break the fastest.
MIN-HEE
Why?
YOON SEO-JIN
People who come in clinging to a single calculation tend to fall apart when the field doesn’t go according to plan.
YOON SEO-JIN
You may come to earn money and have no time to spend it. You may come to save your family and never see them again.
YOON SEO-JIN
Ms. Kim, you’re already classified as high risk.
MIN-HEE
Because of my physical condition?
YOON SEO-JIN
That too. But you also have a habit of taking on more people than you can carry.
YOON SEO-JIN
We are not a charity.
YOON SEO-JIN
We are a security company. We are paid to protect people and facilities.
MIN-HEE
I know.
YOON SEO-JIN
A lot of applicants don’t.
MIN-HEE
Is that so?
YOON SEO-JIN
You don’t seem to know it either.
YOON SEO-JIN
However, we try not to abandon people simply because they have no money. That got twisted into a strange rumor, and it’s become quite a headache for the company lately.
YOON SEO-JIN
We are not kind, and we are not good. We sign contracts. We calculate costs. We calculate profit and loss.
She pauses and looks out the window.
YOON SEO-JIN
But in the field, there are times when you have to act before the calculations are complete.
MIN-HEE
Then why not just move fast?
YOON SEO-JIN
People who say that so easily usually die fast too.
YOON SEO-JIN
That is why we called you here.
YOON SEO-JIN
Why did you apply to our company, Ms. Kim?
MIN-HEE
As I said, I want my mom to eat.
MIN-HEE
And.
MIN-HEE
I think people like that need to be protected too.
YOON SEO-JIN
What kind of people?
MIN-HEE
People who aren’t in the contract.
MIN-HEE
People without ration rights. People without names. People pushed aside because they have no money.
She places a thin terminal on the desk.
A long document appears.
ON SCREEN: IRONPIERCER CONDITIONAL PROBATIONARY FIELD AGENT CONTRACT.
YOON SEO-JIN
Ms. Kim, you will be classified as a probationary field agent rather than a full field agent. Your duties will include field training and support work in New Haven. Depending on your performance or how quickly you adapt, the company may evaluate you and promote you to permanent status.
YOON SEO-JIN
The base pay for probationary agents is not high. Hazard pay is calculated separately after field assignment and paid at the same rate full agents receive. Compensation for death or disappearance is paid according to the terms of the contract. However, unauthorized absence, refusal of orders, or reckless or intentional misconduct may disqualify you from compensation.
YOON SEO-JIN
Voluntary return during the contract period is restricted. Your assignment may be changed at the company’s discretion. Emergency deployment outside your contracted region may also be required depending on conditions in the field.
YOON SEO-JIN
We can transfer part of the advance payment to a designated family account immediately.
MIN-HEE
How much?
Yoon Seo-jin silently displays the amount.
MIN-HEE
You can send this immediately?
YOON SEO-JIN
Once you sign and designate a recipient.
MIN-HEE
Today?
YOON SEO-JIN
Yes.
MIN-HEE
Right now?
YOON SEO-JIN
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
A lot of applicants sign because they see only the money. Most regret it. I’ve seen many of them.
MIN-HEE
But the money is still transferred?
YOON SEO-JIN
Yes.
MIN-HEE
Then that’s enough.
YOON SEO-JIN
Do you mean that?
MIN-HEE
What?
YOON SEO-JIN
From the moment you accept the money, Ms. Kim, you cannot run away. If you do, you become a criminal.
YOON SEO-JIN
The advance payment is not a gift. It is closer to a debt. The company pays first, and you repay it through the contract period and field service.
MIN-HEE
I know.
YOON SEO-JIN
You don’t look like you know.
MIN-HEE
I’m an adult now.
YOON SEO-JIN
Ms. Kim.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
You don’t have to sign now. You may go home, discuss it with your guardian, and answer tomorrow.
MIN-HEE
I’ll do it now.
YOON SEO-JIN
Don’t make an impulsive decision.
MIN-HEE
It isn’t impulsive.
YOON SEO-JIN
You learned this morning that your guardian had been giving up her lunch ration, correct?
MIN-HEE
That appears there too?
YOON SEO-JIN
It is included in the applicant background assessment.
YOON SEO-JIN
That’s why I’m asking again.
YOON SEO-JIN
Are you choosing this out of anger, or is it a decision?
MIN-HEE
A choice.
YOON SEO-JIN
Then I’ll confirm one last time.
The last page of the contract appears.
YOON SEO-JIN
Once you sign, the advance payment will be transferred immediately to the designated account. Withdrawal afterward may incur a penalty, and the procedure for your probationary field assignment in New Haven will begin.
MIN-HEE
Yes.
YOON SEO-JIN
Are you sure you want to sign?
Min-hee takes the crumpled bills from her pocket.
She puts her finger on the signature field.
ON SCREEN: SIGNATURE - KIM MIN-HEE.
FOR A BETTER TOMORROW.
A new window opens: DESIGNATE THE RECIPIENT OF THE ADVANCE
KIM SU-JEONG - REGISTERED GUARDIAN ACCOUNT.
TRANSFER?
Min-hee presses the button.
TRANSFER COMPLETE.
She takes the terminal back.
YOON SEO-JIN
Okay. You are now an Ironpiercer conditional probationary field agent, Ms. Kim.
YOON SEO-JIN
Please wait in the waiting room for further instructions.
Min-hee's terminal rings as she stands and opens the door.
ON SCREEN: MOM.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - HALLWAY - EVENING
The call ends. ONE MISSED CALL.
The screen goes dark.
The terminal rings again. MOM.
The second call disconnects. TWO MISSED CALLS. A message arrives: MIN-HEE. WHAT IS THIS MONEY? ANSWER THE PHONE.
The terminal rings a third time. Min-hee answers.
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
SU-JEONG
Where are you?
SU-JEONG
Min-hee, where are you?
MIN-HEE
At the Ironpiercer branch.
SU-JEONG
You’re still there?
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
Is the examination over?
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
Then why didn’t you call me?
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
What is this money?
MIN-HEE
An advance payment.
SU-JEONG
What advance payment?
MIN-HEE
Money they give you first if you sign a contract.
SU-JEONG
What contract?
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
I signed.
SU-JEONG
Without telling me?
MIN-HEE
If I told you, you would say it was okay.
SU-JEONG
Send the money back.
MIN-HEE
I can’t.
SU-JEONG
Why?
MIN-HEE
I already signed.
SU-JEONG
Then withdraw.
MIN-HEE
There’s a penalty.
SU-JEONG
Then I’ll find a way.
MIN-HEE
How, Mom?
Her breathing stops on the other end.
MIN-HEE
Use that money to eat.
MIN-HEE
Mom, why do you always treat your body like something you can spend?
SU-JEONG
I’m sorry.
MIN-HEE
Don’t say you’re sorry.
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
If you’re sorry, eat.
MIN-HEE
Use the money to eat. Stop giving up lunch. Stop saving money because it’s my birthday. Just eat.
Her breath trembles very softly.
SU-JEONG
I didn’t raise you so you could become someone who brings me money.
MIN-HEE
I know.
SU-JEONG
I don’t think you do.
MIN-HEE
I do.
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
SU-JEONG
What if I don’t use the money?
MIN-HEE
I’ll send more.
SU-JEONG
Do you think money is that easy?
MIN-HEE
No.
SU-JEONG
Then why?
MIN-HEE
Because it’s still easier than watching you skip lunch.
SU-JEONG
When are you leaving?
MIN-HEE
I don’t know yet.
SU-JEONG
To New Haven?
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
It’s dangerous, isn’t it?
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
Are you scared?
MIN-HEE
A little.
SU-JEONG
I’ll eat.
MIN-HEE
Really?
SU-JEONG
Yes.
MIN-HEE
Lunch too?
SU-JEONG
Yes.
MIN-HEE
Tomorrow too?
SU-JEONG
Yes.
MIN-HEE
Next week too?
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
Promise me.
SU-JEONG
I promise.
SU-JEONG
You promise too.
MIN-HEE
What?
SU-JEONG
Don’t get hurt.
MIN-HEE
Okay.
SU-JEONG
Min-hee.
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
I’m angry.
MIN-HEE
I know.
SU-JEONG
Very angry.
MIN-HEE
Yeah.
SU-JEONG
But.
SU-JEONG
But I’ll still eat.
MIN-HEE
Okay.
SU-JEONG
You have to answer your phone.
MIN-HEE
Okay.
SU-JEONG
And send messages often.
MIN-HEE
Okay.
SU-JEONG
Don’t hide things.
MIN-HEE
I’ll try.
SU-JEONG
All right.
MIN-HEE
Eat.
SU-JEONG
You too.
MIN-HEE
Okay.
The call ends, and the screen goes dark.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - WAITING ROOM - EVENING
Min-hee returns to the waiting room. Han Si-woo looks up. More applicants are here now; one bites their nails while another keeps rereading the contract.
HAN SI-WOO
What happened?
MIN-HEE
I almost died talking to my mom.
HAN SI-WOO
That sounds rough.
HAN SI-WOO
Did you sign?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
HAN SI-WOO
Sent the money?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
HAN SI-WOO
Must be chaos at home.
MIN-HEE
Did you send yours too?
HAN SI-WOO
I sent it to myself.
MIN-HEE
To yourself?
HAN SI-WOO
Yeah. I need to clear my debts first.
After a while, the waiting-room door opens and an employee enters.
EMPLOYEE
Conditional probationary field agents, please move to the briefing room.
HAN SI-WOO
What a filthy long title.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - BRIEFING ROOM - EVENING
The briefing room is a little larger than the waiting room.
A large screen stands at the front. Chairs are arranged in rows. Six applicants sit with different numbers on their wrists.
The screen turns on: IRONPIERCER CONDITIONAL PROBATIONARY FIELD AGENT ORIENTATION.
The text crawls up from the bottom of the screen with exaggerated slowness. Even the employee clears his throat before it finally settles and the briefing begins.
EMPLOYEE
We’ll now begin the basic orientation. Questions will be answered at the end.
ON SCREEN: POTENTIAL ASSIGNMENT - NEW HAVEN OUTER SETTLEMENT SUPPORT OPERATIONS TEAM.
The screen changes to PERSONAL AI ASSISTANT REGISTRATION - SELECT A DEFAULT CALL SIGN: NOVA / RANGER / BEACON / SENTINEL / GUARDIAN / KEEPER / MOTHER.
EMPLOYEE
Repeat physical examinations begin tomorrow morning. An unfit result may restrict the use of certain equipment. The equipment compatibility assessment varies according to body type, reaction speed, and neural-imprinting stability.
HAN SI-WOO
This is starting to feel genuinely scary.
MIN-HEE
Be quiet.
HAN SI-WOO
I talk when I’m scared.
EMPLOYEE
Personal AI assistants are used for field communications, operational records, biometric monitoring, and assisted equipment control. You may select a default call sign during registration. Changes to the call sign will be restricted afterward.
HAN SI-WOO
Which one should I choose?
MIN-HEE
I don’t know.
EMPLOYEE
You may choose the call sign on your terminals. There is no functional difference between them.
Min-hee's eyes return to MOTHER. She selects it.
ON SCREEN: MOTHER - SELECTION COMPLETE. DEFAULT CALL SIGN REGISTERED.
HAN SI-WOO
I’m choosing Guardian.
HAN SI-WOO
It sounds sturdy.
ON SCREEN: BASIC VOICE SYNCHRONIZATION WILL TAKE PLACE BEFORE DEPARTURE.
HAN SI-WOO
Mother?
MIN-HEE
Why?
HAN SI-WOO
It doesn’t sound very strong.
MIN-HEE
It’s a strong name.
HAN SI-WOO
You’re right.
The employee moves on to the next slide.
EMPLOYEE
Next is the tentative departure date.
Everyone looks at the screen.
Even Han Si-woo, slouched in his chair, goes still.
ON SCREEN: TENTATIVE DEPARTURE DATE FOR NEW HAVEN - THREE DAYS FROM NOW.
EMPLOYEE
The tentative date may change according to field conditions and transport availability. At present, departure in three days is the most likely outcome.
A final line appears: THE APPLICANT MUST PERSONALLY NOTIFY THE REGISTERED GUARDIAN BEFORE DEPARTURE.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - EXAMINATION AREA - DAY
Three days of pre-departure procedures begin: repeat physical examinations, equipment fitting, compatibility tests, and field warnings.
Old mechanical arms hang from the ceiling above a white circle painted on the floor. Min-hee stands inside it with her arms raised and legs apart.
The arms attach thin patches to her shoulders, waist, wrists, and the back of her neck.
ON SCREEN: MOVE TO THE DESIGNATED STANDBY POINT IF COMMUNICATIONS ARE LOST.
ON SCREEN: MOVEMENT OUTSIDE THE CONTRACTED REGION REQUIRES APPROVAL FROM COMMAND.
ON SCREEN: INJURIES AND DEATH CAUSED BY FAILURE TO FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS MAY BE EXCLUDED FROM COMPENSATION.
The repeat examination still finds plenty below standard: insufficient strength, low nutritional status, recalibration of the artificial tooth recommended. One result exceeds the requirement: NEURAL-IMPRINTING STABILITY - EXCEPTIONALLY HIGH.
EXAMINER
Don’t move.
MIN-HEE
I haven’t moved.
EXAMINER
You’re trembling a little.
HAN SI-WOO
They look at us like broken refrigerators.
MIN-HEE
They told us to be quiet.
HAN SI-WOO
Refrigerators deserve the right to speak too.
INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - NEURAL IMPRINTING ROOM -
Several faces appear on the selection screen. Men. Women. Older people. Younger people. None of them are smiling.
One woman catches Min-hee's eye: CATHERINE LOWELL.
EMPLOYEE
Neural imprinting stores the language, field judgment, combat machine control data, and motor memories of a former agent born and raised on New Haven in a separate layer of the nervous system. It drastically reduces the required training period.
EMPLOYEE
Your existing memories remain in the preservation layer, while the imprint data is stored separately. It can be called up as supporting memory when needed.
ON SCREEN: BORN ON NEW HAVEN. ENGLISH-SPEAKING HOUSEHOLD. BOTH ADOPTIVE PARENTS ALIVE. IRONPIERCER FIELD AGENT. COMBAT MACHINE CONTROL COMPATIBILITY: 94%.
64 OUTER-SETTLEMENT OPERATIONS COMPLETED. KILLED IN ACTION.
MIN-HEE
I’ll choose her.
EMPLOYEE
Catherine Lowell. Do you select her as the source for integrated neural imprinting?
MIN-HEE
Yes.
EMPLOYEE
Her data contains strong emotional residue. You may experience temporary emotional instability after imprinting.
MIN-HEE
Emotional instability?
EMPLOYEE
Yes.
EMPLOYEE
Responses vary. Since your neural- imprinting stability is high, your emotional response may also be strong. That can be either an advantage or a disadvantage.
MIN-HEE
Her memories won’t mix with mine?
EMPLOYEE
An imprint is closer to the faint, half-remembered feeling left after watching a film. It has nothing to do with your own memories.
MIN-HEE
Oh. Okay.
Min-hee swallows a small white tablet. Cold patches are attached to her forehead, the back of her neck, and both temples. The chair reclines; a thin screen lowers in front of her eyes.
EMPLOYEE
Try not to close your eyes.
The screen turns on. First, light. Then sound. Then smell: dust, oil, hot metal.
People speak in English. A grown man calls out: "Daughter."
A combat machine control stick. Vibration beneath a palm. Weight on the right foot. Recoil through the left shoulder.
A black shell bursts into view from the left. Catherine moves.
A dining table. A bright window. A tall man and a woman with her hair tied back. Catherine laughs. Someone embraces her.
An alarm. Black dust. A broken radio. Red lights inside a combat machine. The left leg will not move.
A voice shouts: "Catherine! Catherine, respond!"
Claws scrape across the combat machine's outer shell. The metal wall tears. The view tilts.
The image snaps to a hospital room, where Catherine lies in a bed as someone calls her name.
Min-hee screams. Tears run down the sides of her face as the imprint room comes back into view.
EMPLOYEE
Ms. Kim, can you hear me? Ms. Kim?
EMPLOYEE
The imprint ended a little early because of excessive emotional response.
EMPLOYEE
Integrated neural imprinting complete. Language synchronization confirmed. Basic combat machine control data synchronized. Field- threat recognition patterns synchronized. Heart rate exceeds the stable range. Please regulate your breathing slowly.
Min-hee is crying in the chair. Her breathing is ragged.
MIN-HEE
(in English)
Shut up.
CUT TO BLACK.
END OF PILOT